Here is my first draft for my DPS. I got some feedback of the good and bad aspects of my page...
The good points were that:
-very colourful
-eye catching image
-good lure ('exclusive')
The bad points were that:
-check spelling and grammar
-add a bubble behind 'debut album out now'
-change layout so writing isn't cut in half
The main point that I need to take on board from the feedback is the layout. At the moment, the text would be cut in half so I need to somehow alter this. It doesn't have the conventions of a DPS because of this issue so I need to think of ways in which I can alter this. I will make all the necessary changes to my page.
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