Here is my first draft of my contents page. I have gathered some feeback from my target audience and here's what they came up with...
The good points are:
-it is very colourful
-has a very noticeable and recognisable genre
-clear page number listings
-clear heading to divide up the contents
The not so good points are:
-there are a few missing numbers on some of the contents
-need to add an online advertisment
-add Jacobs name
-check some spelling and grammar mistakes
-add page number to the actual contents page
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